Three Headed Dog

I was learning how to write a descriptive piece about a fictional character. We had to write what they looked like were they lived and what they were doing. I did mine about a three headed dog. I think I did well on describing the appearance of the dog, although I think I need to  work on onomatopoeia.

The Incredible Moa DNA

We were learning about the Moa and how it could possibly be bought back to life.  We had to create a digital learning object of of either a screencastify, thinglink or powtoon. We made a slide animation and then videoed us moving the slides.

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Tango tangelo

21/2/17
 Tango Tangelo The bright orange skin of the tangelo enhances your sight as soon as you get a glimpse of it. The tangy tangelo has crispy skin that flakes off when you peel it. 
CRACK!
 Under the skin a thin layer of white stringy stuff. I teared off a squishy segment and ripped it in half. The flesh was made of tiny orange transparent segments. The flesh was as shiney as an orange crystal I bit into the tutti frutti tangelo. My tongue did a little tango with my teeth as the taste melted into my throat. My tiny taste buds tingled with pleasure. It was as scrumptious as scrumptious can be. The juice squirted onto my hand and dribbled down my arm. DELICIOS! ! !

 In class we were learning how to write a descriptive piece of writing. We had to examine and taste a tasty tangelo our teacher bought in, then we had to write about it. I think I did well at putting in descriptive words. I also think I need to work on adding in similes and onomatapoeia. I love writing descriptive stories.